The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates fish and various
type
of meat consumption in a city Fix the agreement mistake
types
on
Europe from 1979 to 2004. Change preposition
in
In addition
, the data Linking Words
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was measures
measures
in Replace the word
measured
grams
per person each week.
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Overall
, Linking Words
although
the consumption of Linking Words
chicken
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was
dramatically climbed in the whole period, the other features which are Unnecessary verb
apply
beef
, lamb, and fish experienced a decline with some fluctuation.
At Use synonyms
first,
Linking Words
chicken
stood just under 150 Use synonyms
grams
which Use synonyms
were
in the third position Correct subject-verb agreement
was
then
it sharply grew until the end period of time. Linking Words
As a result
, in 2004, the highest type of Linking Words
meats
that was consumed by Fix the agreement mistake
meat
European
was Fix the agreement mistake
Europeans
chicken
. Use synonyms
In contrast
with Linking Words
beef
, Use synonyms
beef
became the most favorable meat in 1979, but Use synonyms
then
suddenly there was a considerable Linking Words
dipped
that Replace the word
dip
made
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put
beef
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located
in the second position with a great difference from Verb problem
apply
chicken
.
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On the other hand
, each person consumed lamb with 150 Linking Words
grams
in a week in 1979. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
consumptions
moderately dropped until stopped at a little more than 50 Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
grams
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
unsignificant
changes Correct your spelling
insignificant
experienced
Add a missing verb
were experienced
by
the consumption of fish which Change preposition
in
deacreased
Correct your spelling
decreased
approximately
50 Change preposition
by approximately
grams
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, chicken, beef with synonyms.
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