The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
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The given bar chart illustrates data about the percentage of renewable
energy
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to the total
energy
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production in four different countries (Australia, Sweden,
Iceland
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and Turkey) in 1997, 2000 and 2010.
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, Sweden and
Iceland
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witnessed an upward trend during 3 time periods,
while
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Australia and Turkey stayed at a lower place later. It can be seen that
Iceland
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consumed the highest reused
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. In 1997, the
energy
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production in
Iceland
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came from renewable sources
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for almost half.
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figure climbed steadily to three-fifths in 2000 and 70% in 2000. Meanwhile, in 1997, only approximately 5% of renewable
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in Sweden, had been generated, rose moderately during 3 time periods and occupied under 10% in 2000, experiencing a similar trend to that of
Iceland
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. Regarding the remaining categories, Australia’s
energy
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supply accounted for approximately 10% of renewable
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in 1997,
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figure decreased slightly to around 5%
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10 years later.
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,
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it had a rise from under to over 40% in 1997 to 2000, Turkey witnessed a drop in 2010, remaining under a third of renewable
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sources.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, iceland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • renewable energy
  • total energy supply
  • percentage
  • overall
  • changed
  • increases
  • decreases
  • fluctuating
  • trend
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • commitment
  • sustainability
  • environmental protection
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