The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows figures for the amount of money that citizens of the United Kingdom and the United States spend on
fuel
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Overall
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, as can be seen,
in contrast
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to Engish citizens, residents in The USA spend much of their income on petrol.
Also
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evident is, in the United Kingdom people who are in need spend the lowest amount of the money that they make on
fuel
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about 0.5% to 2.5 %,
while
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, poor individuals in the United States devote about 4% to 5.2% of their income to buy petrol. It is an important fact that residents from the middle-income group in the UK spend at most almost 3.8% of their income,
whereas
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,
this
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is the lowest proportion that people from the same group in the USA spend on
fuel
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. The amount of money
is
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spent by the richest citizens of the United Kingdom on
fuel
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does not vary a lot, it's about 3.5% to 3.9%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditures
  • disparities
  • evolved
  • fluctuations
  • stabilization
  • significant gap
  • trends
  • economic conditions
  • vehicular technology
  • public transportation
  • summarise
  • comparison
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