The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The line graph provides data about the changes in food
consumption
by Chinese individuals between 1985 and 2010.
Overall
, in all years
fish
had the highest
consumption
rate
compared to
meat
and
salt
. As can clearly be seen,
initially
fish
had the highest
consumption
rate
at 600
grams
, meanwhile,
meat
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had the lowest
consumption
rate
with
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100
grams
. Originally, the
consumption
rate
of
salt
was a little less than 500
grams
,
however
, over time it started to decrease gradually and in 2010 the
consumption
rate
of
salt
was 200
grams
. Despite the decline in
salt
consumption
,
meat
and
fish
experienced an increase. In 1990 the
consumption
rate
of
fish
was 700
grams
. From 1990 to 1995 the
consumption
rate
of
fish
declined from 700
grams
to 600 reaching
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its initial
rate
,
however
, from 1995 to 2010 the
consumption
rate
of
fish
started to rise and in 2010 the
consumption
rate
of
fish
reached its peak accounting for approximately 850
grams
. In 1990 the
consumption
of
meat
was more or less 150
grams
,
however
over time it rose and in 2010 reached its peak at 200
grams
. In 2010
fish
had the highest
consumption
rate
, meanwhile, the
consumption
rates of
meat
and
salt
were the same accounting for 200
grams
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, rate, meat, salt, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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