The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The line graph provides data about the changes in food
consumption
by Chinese individuals between 1985 and 2010.
Overall
, in all years fish
had the highest consumption
rate
compared to meat
and salt
.
As can clearly be seen, initially
fish
had the highest consumption
rate
at 600 grams
, meanwhile, meat
had the lowest Add an article
the meat
consumption
rate
with
100 Change preposition
at
grams
. Originally, the consumption
rate
of salt
was a little less than 500 grams
, however
, over time it started to decrease gradually and in 2010 the consumption
rate
of salt
was 200 grams
. Despite the decline in salt
consumption
, meat
and fish
experienced an increase. In 1990 the consumption
rate
of fish
was 700 grams
. From 1990 to 1995 the consumption
rate
of fish
declined from 700 grams
to 600 reaching at
its initial Remove the preposition
apply
rate
, however
, from 1995 to 2010 the consumption
rate
of fish
started to rise and in 2010 the consumption
rate
of fish
reached its peak accounting for approximately 850 grams
. In 1990 the consumption
of meat
was more or less 150 grams
, however
over time it rose and in 2010 reached its peak at 200 grams
. In 2010 fish
had the highest consumption
rate
, meanwhile, the consumption
rates of meat
and salt
were the same accounting for 200 grams
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