The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of reading activity based on books in comparisons by gender

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between 2011 and 2014 at Burnaby Public Library.

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of the books read

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always increasing time after time. And the higher

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of male visitors in 2014 with 14000.

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of books read

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and 4000 for

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2013, rising up rapidly

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with 5000 and still

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with 14000. In conclusion, there is fluctuated occur for

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in 4 years, specifically in the

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