The chart below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #percentage #population #four #asian #countries #cities #predictions #summarise #features #comparisons
The graph tells us information regarding the number of
population
that live in cities as a percentage of the whole population
in four Asian countries namely, Indonesia, Malaysia, Thailand, and Philippines
over a 60-year period towards 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040.
Correct article usage
the Philippines
Overall
, the four countries oversaw a steady increase
in urban population
percentage from 1970 to 2020 and the numbers are projected to be slightly increasing in the two decades after.
Both Malaysia and Indonesia,
Remove the comma
apply
seems
to be experiencing Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
drastic
Add an article
a drastic
increase
in urban Fix the agreement mistake
increases
population
as a percentage from the start of the charts towards the
2010 Correct article usage
apply
while
afterwards the increase
are experiencing
a slowdown. Meanwhile, Wrong verb form
experienced
Philppines
oversaw a drastic Correct your spelling
Philippines
increase
of 20% in the
1990 before experiencing a decline of 10% following 1990 up until Change the article
apply
2010s
and will be projected to a steady Change the article
the 2010s
increase
in following 2020. Whereas
Thailand Correct word choice
apply
is
Verb problem
has
experiencing
Wrong verb form
experienced
a
stagnation from the decades of 1990s up until Correct article usage
apply
2010s
and is projected to Correct article usage
the 2010s
increase
drastically in 2030s
and 2040s.Correct article usage
the 2030s
Submitted by athaarhdyn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, increase with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!