The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the advancement of cutting tools during the Stone Age between 1.4 and 0.8 million years. It is obvious that there are two to compare, namely Tool A and Tool B.
Overall
, the cutter's height measurement remained the same throughout the years, which is about 10 cm. It is Linking Words
also
given three types of views, which are the front, side, and back.
Based on its shape and texture, it is observed from the front view that the upper sharp equipment had more definition, rigidity, and rough edges, Linking Words
whereas
the lower one had more shininess, smoothness and a few flat edges. The first seemed to possess a wider and bulkier structure too compared to the Linking Words
second,
judging by its side look.
Meanwhile, when observed from other characteristics, Linking Words
such
as its surface Linking Words
color
, cutter A had much darker tones and Change the spelling
colour
within
the range of black and dark grey. Add a missing verb
was within
In contrast
, cutter B appeared Linking Words
more
lighter with a Change the word
apply
color
range of dark to light grey.Change the spelling
colour
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