The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the advancement of cutting tools during the Stone Age between 1.4 and 0.8 million years. It is obvious that there are two to compare, namely Tool A and Tool B.

Overall

, the cutter's height measurement remained the same throughout the years, which is about 10 cm. It is

also

given three types of views, which are the front, side, and back. Based on its shape and texture, it is observed from the front view that the upper sharp equipment had more definition, rigidity, and rough edges,

whereas

the lower one had more shininess, smoothness and a few flat edges. The first seemed to possess a wider and bulkier structure too compared to the

second,

judging by its side look. Meanwhile, when observed from other characteristics,

such

as its surface

color

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, cutter A had much darker tones and

within

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the range of black and dark grey.

In contrast

, cutter B appeared

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apply

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lighter with a

color

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colour

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range of dark to light grey.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

164 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

Stone Age
tools
cutting
development
rudimentary
sophisticated
progression
unworked pebbles
flake tools
bifacial tools
efficiency
materials
emergence
characteristics
functionality
craftsmanship
precision
hunting
carving
advancements
significance
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