The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about the fluctuation of average prices of Copper, Nickel, and
Zinc
in every month in 2014.
Overall
, three metals underwent an up and down trend during the period. Interestingly,
although
started at the lowest place,
Zinc
ended at the highest position compared to the others.
To begin
with, in January, three metals were valued at 2%, 6%, and 1% compared to
last
year.
However
, Copper and Nickel underwent a decrease in March, whilst the
last
metal saw the reverse. Meanwhile, Nickle plummeted from below 1% to -3% in June. in the same period,
Zinc
experienced a decrease from 1% to -1%.
Nonetheless
, Copper had a steady in that month, and gradually increased
at the end
of the year, accounting for around 1.5%. Nickle
also
inclined into 1%
at the end
,
while
Zinc
climbed from 1% in October to 2% in December.
In addition
,
Zinc
started with 1% in January, making the metal in the
last
position.
Nevertheless
, it climbed in the second month before gradually declining in July but ended at first position in December with 2%.
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