The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about the fluctuation of average prices of Copper, Nickel, and
Zinc
in every month in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, three metals underwent an up and down trend during the period. Interestingly, Linking Words
although
started at the lowest place, Linking Words
Zinc
ended at the highest position compared to the others.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, in January, three metals were valued at 2%, 6%, and 1% compared to Linking Words
last
year. Linking Words
However
, Copper and Nickel underwent a decrease in March, whilst the Linking Words
last
metal saw the reverse. Meanwhile, Nickle plummeted from below 1% to -3% in June. in the same period, Linking Words
Zinc
experienced a decrease from 1% to -1%. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, Copper had a steady in that month, and gradually increased Linking Words
at the end
of the year, accounting for around 1.5%. Nickle Linking Words
also
inclined into 1% Linking Words
at the end
, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
Zinc
climbed from 1% in October to 2% in December.
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In addition
, Linking Words
Zinc
started with 1% in January, making the metal in the Use synonyms
last
position. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, it climbed in the second month before gradually declining in July but ended at first position in December with 2%.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zinc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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