The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides information about the fluctuation of average prices of Copper, Nickel, and
Zinc
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in every month in 2014.
Overall
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, three metals underwent an up and down trend during the period. Interestingly,
although
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started at the lowest place,
Zinc
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ended at the highest position compared to the others.
To begin
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with, in January, three metals were valued at 2%, 6%, and 1% compared to
last
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year.
However
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, Copper and Nickel underwent a decrease in March, whilst the
last
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metal saw the reverse. Meanwhile, Nickle plummeted from below 1% to -3% in June. in the same period,
Zinc
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experienced a decrease from 1% to -1%.
Nonetheless
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, Copper had a steady in that month, and gradually increased
at the end
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of the year, accounting for around 1.5%. Nickle
also
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inclined into 1%
at the end
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,
while
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Zinc
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climbed from 1% in October to 2% in December.
In addition
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,
Zinc
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started with 1% in January, making the metal in the
last
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position.
Nevertheless
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, it climbed in the second month before gradually declining in July but ended at first position in December with 2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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