The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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carbon

dioxide

emissions

per person in 4

european

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countries for the years 1967 and 2007.

It is clear that

co2

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CO2

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emissions

in Portugal rose dramatically but

carbon

dioxide

emission in

Sweden

has

fall

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over the period shown. In 1967,

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the united

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united kingdom

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United Kingdom

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was the

most

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largest

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producer

carbon

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of carbon

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dioxide

per person over 10 metric

tonnes

while

Portugal

produce

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a negligible amount of

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dioxide

Sweden

produce

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much more

carbon

dioxide

than Italy, about 8 and 4 metric

tonnes

respectively. United

kingdom

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saw only a small fall in

carbon

dioxide

emissions

over a period of 40 years,

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Portugal rose dramatically from 1.5 metric

tonnes

in 1967 to 5.8 metric

tonnes

in 2007. Between 1967 and 1977

co2

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CO2

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emissions

rose in Italy and

Sweden

and reached 6 and 10 metric

tonnes

respectively, after that

co2

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CO2

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emissions

fall

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dramatically

about

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5 metric

tonnes

Sweden

but in Italy it rose

about

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8 metric

tonnes

in 1997 and

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this

level for the rest of the period.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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