The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two tables provide information about fair
trade
-labelled product sales,
such
as
coffee
and
bananas
, between 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.
Moreover
, the data is provided in millions of
euros
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the fair
trade
for
bananas
showed a more significant amount of money rather than
coffee
. From the first table, the noticeable increase came from the UK. In 1999, the sales of
coffee
were only 1.5
million
euros
.
However
, it had a dramatic increase, and in 2004, it generated around 13 times more than before, 20
million
euros
.
In contrast
, fair
trade
for
coffee
made only a slight decrease in Switzerland and Sweden as it only increased by 0.2
million
euros
.
Overall
, the fair
trade
increased between 1999 and 2004 for
coffee
in all 5 countries. For
bananas
, it can be seen that, in 1999, especially in Switzerland, the fair
trade
of
bananas
made money up to 15
million
euros
.
This
amount was far more considerable than the fair
trade
for
coffee
at that time.
Initially
,
bananas
generated 2
million
euros
in Denmark.
However
, by the end of the given period, there was a moderate decrease as it only generated 0.9
million
euros
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, euros, trade, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.

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  • Fairtrade labelled
  • significant increase/decrease
  • consumer awareness
  • sustainable growth
  • ethical consumerism
  • market trends
  • dominant market
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic impact
  • market penetration
  • exponential growth
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