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the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevolpment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevalnt.

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These maps illustrate the scenario of an
airport
 before and after its
refurblishment
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refurbishment
 in the following year. We can see
hene
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these
 remarkable developments in different stages. A large number of facilities are introduced as well. On the one hand,
in
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on
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 the western side of the
airport
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airport,
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 some shops
has
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 been erected.
Besides
, the cafe
is
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 replaced by check-in and rebuilt near the departures.
In Addition
, a bag drop took place where the check-in was
proeviously
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previously
. Now, the departures
is
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 doubled in number and in the southern part, ten more gates
has
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 been opened. sky train facility has been constructed between the southern and northern
area
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.
On the other hand
,
in
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 the eastern side of the
airport
, a new cafe has been built and an ATM as well.
Moreover
, a car hire can be seen in an extended part of the
airport
. The arrivals are doubled in number compared to the old map. Though significant changes can be seen, the security,
the
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passport controls and customs remained the same place.
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introduction conclusion present
Make sure your essay includes an introduction that paraphrases the prompt, a clear overview summarizing the main changes, and a conclusion that encapsulates the main points. Your introduction could more clearly set the scene for the comparison.
supported main points
Develop your main points by providing more specific details and examples that highlight the changes made. This will help you with task achievement and ensure you cover the prompt comprehensively.
logical structure
Use a range of cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs and to help the reader navigate through your response. You could add more transitions to clearly show the relationship between old and new structures.
complete response
To fully address the task, you need to ensure that every aspect of the maps is acknowledged. If the maps show changes that you haven't mentioned, it can lower your task achievement score.
clear comprehensive ideas
Continue to practice organizing your ideas clearly and logically. Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and that the supporting sentences are relevant to it.

Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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