Line Chart Shows Serious Violent Crime Levels From 1978 To 2000 In The US IELTS Academic Writing Task 1

Line Chart Shows Serious Violent Crime Levels From 1978 To 2000 In The US IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The Line chart illustrates serious violent
crime
at four levels in the United States in the past two decades between 1978 to 2000.
Overall
, between the four levels, it can be seen arrest for violent
crime
was the lowest position. It shows less than one thousand
cases
year
by
year
.
However
, total violent
crime
was the highest. Serious violent
crime
decreased in two years between 1970 and 1980.
Moreover
, in 1980 the
cases
had a significant increase until 1988.
however
, after 1988 gradually fell. Similar to a total violent
crime
, victimisations were reported to the
police
and experienced up and down. Recorded, approximately twenty-five hundred in 1984 was the highest
cases
.
Nonetheless
, the number of
cases
reported to the
police
was progressively down from 1990 to 2000. Crimes recorded by
police
have jumped from
year
to
year
, in 1995 over 1800
cases
were recorded and being the highest
also
, crimes recorded by
police
pass the victimisations reported to
police
in 1999.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, cases, year, police with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gradual increase
  • sharp decline
  • stable
  • peak
  • plateau
  • surge
  • plummet
  • fluctuate
  • significant drop
  • marginal increase
  • notable decrease
  • dramatic rise
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • criminal offenses
  • violent crimes
  • homicides
  • assaults
  • robberies
  • burglaries
  • larcenies
  • motor vehicle thefts
  • rape
  • burglary rate
  • crime rates per capita
  • incarceration rate
  • law enforcement efforts
  • crime prevention strategies
  • socioeconomic factors
  • poverty levels
  • unemployment rates
  • drug abuse
  • gang activity
  • economic recession
  • demographic changes
  • urbanization
  • implications
  • criminal justice system
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