Task 1 The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
diagram illustrates how Verb problem
apply
manufacture
Replace the word
manufactured
bricks
are used for building
industry.
As can be inferred from the diagram, there are seven steps beginning with digging clay from underground and finishing with Add an article
the building
delivery
Correct article usage
the delivery
bricks
.
Change preposition
of bricks
Firstly
, a digger is used to dig clay from underground. The clay then
is filtered by a metal grid and put onto a roller to add sand and water. After that, the mixture is shaped by two methods: wire cutter or mould. Those formed bricks
are arranged neatly and transported into a drying oven for drying in 24 - 48 hours to prepare for the next steps.
The forth
step is putting Correct your spelling
fourth
bricks
into a machinery system for heated
. At Replace the word
heat
first,
the kiln heat
Replace the word
heated
bricks
with
Change preposition
at
moderate
temperature Correct article usage
a moderate
at
200 C - 980 C. Change preposition
of
Next,
the temperature increase
Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
to
870oC to 1300oC, Change preposition
from
then
the brickis
are moved into a cooling chamber in two to three days. After that, those ready-to-use Correct your spelling
bricks
brick is
bricks
are packaged, put on a truck for delivery and finish
the process.Wrong verb form
finished
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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