The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
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The chart illustrates the common
issues
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that were reported in the
neighborhood
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in 2018
at
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the UK.
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, the most popular problems among three sectors and seven cities in the UK were health services
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following
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with
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education and training, and air population. In general, health services were the main struggle
issues
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in the UK towns in 2018. It
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clear that the
peaked
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was in Belfast
approximately
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68% and in Cardiff that hit around 67%. The least common
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issues
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were
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air pollution, where Newcastle was the lowest city
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below 10%
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with
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Belfast, Birmingham, Glasgow, Cardiff, London, and Manchester.
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the education and training
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also
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the second ordinary obstacle between two other difficulties. In Glasgow and
London
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London,
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this
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trouble was at
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54%, as well with Belfast and Birmingham
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the same point that hit around 52%,
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with
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Cardiff at 51%, Newcastle at 48%, and Manchester at 45%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words issues with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordable housing
  • urban areas
  • overcrowding
  • homelessness
  • traffic congestion
  • car ownership
  • public transportation systems
  • commuting times
  • air pollution
  • industrial activities
  • air quality
  • green spaces
  • urbanization
  • mental health
  • crime rates
  • socio-economic factors
  • sense of security
  • waste management
  • waste disposal
  • recycling
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