In some societies, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? Do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?
of individuals choosing to live alone is particularly noticeable in urban areas and developed countries. There
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to building a family for many reasons. First of all, economic factors. The
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introduction
The essay introduction is incomplete and does not fully address the prompt. Please ensure that your introduction sets the context for the essay and presents a clear thesis statement addressing why people choose to live alone and whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
coherence
Ensure that your essay has a logical flow of ideas. Each paragraph should have a clear main topic and the ideas should be organized in a way that each paragraph smoothly transitions to the next, leading towards a coherent conclusion.
supporting points
Provide adequate support for your main points by using relevant examples and explanations. Each assertion should be followed by an explanation or example to strengthen your argument.
task response
Your essay must address both aspects of the prompt fully - reasons for living alone and an argument discussing if the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Remember to cover all parts of the prompt to achieve a higher score in task achievement.
grammar & spelling
The essay contains several grammatical errors and misspellings. Please review and correct errors to enhance the clarity and professionalism of your writing. Aim for accurate spelling, verb forms, and sentence structure.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
There is no denying the fact that, Some people from different countries think that the government do not have the ability to take care of old people but others can for some reason. While it is a commonly held belief that, the government who can take care of them have enough money, there is also an argument that, other governments do not have the ability to take care of old people. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
It is argued that the government should invest money in railways instead of roads. I agree with this point of view because railways are more environmentally friendly and also play a role in economic activity.
The rise in consumer goods production has undeniably caused significant harm to the environment. I believe exploring the causes of this problem can assist in finding suitable solutions to resolve it.
Nowadays most people are working extra hours at the cost of their mental and physical health, to make both ends meet. This is mainly attributed to the global recession noticed post-pandemic, resulting in lowered salaries and raised insecurity among workers about their job stability. This essay will further explain these reasons and discuss how nurturing a healthy work environment and an empathetic approach by organizational management can help reduce this stress among employees.
In our modern life, educating the younger generation is more significant as compared to illustrating maturity.While many people hold the view that the authority ought to expand its resource in educating old people . I vehemently disagree with that position. This essay will discuss the benefits of investing in the education of the younger population and the demerits of prioritising educating adults.