The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of books

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read by males and females at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 until 2014.

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, the number of men increased ,

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the women

reader

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dropped.

Girls

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count started

with

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nearly 5,000 in 2011 and kept

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steadily increasing way and reached 8,000 in the next year , and stay rising until 2013 to the highest number of

females

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readers which it is ten-thousand,

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after that the dropping

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finally

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with lower than 8,000 readers. On the other

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the men began with lower than 4,000 , but after that the reader of men rose to six-thousand in the middle between 2012 and 2013 and it is never failed or dropped as girls in the opposite it

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over females by exactly 4,000 of boys that reading books and it is the highest number in the whole chart from both genders.