The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The
three
pie charts provide information about a
Correct article usage
the
proportion
of annual expenditure
in a UK school in three
different years
, (1981, 1991, and 2001)
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest amount of money was spent on teachers’ salaries in all years
, while
insurance received the smallest proportion
.
It is clear that
the vast majority of the total expenditure
was allocated to teachers' salaries in all three
years
, accounting for 40%, 50%, and 45% of total spending respectively. The school spent a
second largest Correct article usage
the
proportion
of its expenditure
on other workers’ salaries in both 1981 and 1991, at 28% and 22% respectively. However
, this
proportion
decreased to only 15% in 2001. While
spending on furniture and equipment decreased from 15% to 5% between 1981 and 1991, it increased by almost a quarter in 2001.
In 1981, 15% of the school's expenditure
was on resources, which increased slightly in 1991 and dropped to 9% in 2001. However
, insurance received the smallest share of the expenditure
in all three
years
, at 2%, 3%, and 8%, respectively.Submitted by sadiahussain028 on
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