The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
flow chart illustrates the process of making Linking Words
noodles
that can be eaten instantly in Use synonyms
a
easy process.
There Change the article
an
ane
eight main stages and some sub-stages from silos storage to labelling and sealing. Every stage has its own distinction.
Correct your spelling
are
Firstly
, flour has been stored in the storage silos. It looks like, the capacity of the storage is huge. Linking Words
Then
, raw flour Linking Words
are
kept in a mixer where water and oil have been mixed. Later, some rollers help to carry dough sheets Change the verb form
is
what
are made. These are turned into dough strips in the following step.
Correct word choice
that
Besides
, there are Linking Words
noodles
discs Use synonyms
shape
the Correct pronoun usage
that shape
noodles
and in the next stage cooking oil Use synonyms
has been
mixed. Wrong verb form
is
Additionally
, the drying process Linking Words
have
been completed in Change the verb form
has
this
step and Linking Words
are
kept Correct subject-verb agreement
is
into
the cups. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, vegetables and spices have been added. There are labels for the outer part of the cups which Linking Words
are containing
Wrong verb form
contain
noodles
. At Use synonyms
last
, labelling and sealing have been done and instant Linking Words
noodles
are ready completely.Use synonyms
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