The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured. 

Summarse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
flow chart illustrates the process of making
noodles
that can be eaten instantly in
a
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easy process. There
ane
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eight main stages and some sub-stages from silos storage to labelling and sealing. Every stage has its own distinction.
Firstly
, flour has been stored in the storage silos. It looks like, the capacity of the storage is huge.
Then
, raw flour
are
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kept in a mixer where water and oil have been mixed. Later, some rollers help to carry dough sheets
what
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are made. These are turned into dough strips in the following step.
Besides
, there are
noodles
discs
shape
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the
noodles
and in the next stage cooking oil
has been
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mixed.
Additionally
, the drying process
have
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been completed in
this
step and
are
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kept
into
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the cups.
Furthermore
, vegetables and spices have been added. There are labels for the outer part of the cups which
are containing
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noodles
. At
last
, labelling and sealing have been done and instant
noodles
are ready completely.
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