The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the
water
supply system in Australia in two different periods now and in future.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
water
supply system will not be eco-friendly in the future because it will not pure
storm
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stormwater
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water
into rivers which might be detrimental
for
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wildlife. Looking at more detail, regarding the present
water
supply, Dam/
storage
water
provides
water
for consumers in different parts of the
city
like households, factories and shops.
Additionally
, the wastewaterwater in
storage
as well as
the
city
flow
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flows
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to the
water
treatment plant. The
stormwaterwater
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stormwater
stream toward the river
assist
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the ecosystem. in order for future
water
supply, it is readily apparent that
water
from both
storage
and Dam/
Storage
and
water
treatment plants is
use
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in the
city
for various purposes.
On the other hand
, both storm
water
and
water
water
from the
city
move to
water
treatment which causes have high-quality
water
supply.
However
, the
stormware
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stormwater
will not add to the river which might pose a threat to wildlife
as well as
the environment.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, storage, city with synonyms.
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