The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams illustrate the
water
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supply system in Australia in two different periods now and in future.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
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supply system will not be eco-friendly in the future because it will not pure
storm
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stormwater
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water
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into rivers which might be detrimental
for
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wildlife. Looking at more detail, regarding the present
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supply, Dam/
storage
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water
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provides
water
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for consumers in different parts of the
city
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like households, factories and shops.
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, the wastewaterwater in
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as well as
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the
city
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flow
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to the
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treatment plant. The
stormwaterwater
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stormwater
stream toward the river
assist
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the ecosystem. in order for future
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supply, it is readily apparent that
water
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from both
storage
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and Dam/
Storage
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and
water
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treatment plants is
use
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in the
city
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for various purposes.
On the other hand
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, both storm
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and
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water
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from the
city
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move to
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treatment which causes have high-quality
water
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supply.
However
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, the
stormware
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stormwater
will not add to the river which might pose a threat to wildlife
as well as
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the environment.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, storage, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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