The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the
water
supply system in Australia in two different periods now and in future. Overall
, it can be seen that the water
supply system will not be eco-friendly in the future because it will not pure storm
Correct your spelling
stormwater
water
into rivers which might be detrimental for
wildlife.
Looking at more detail, regarding the present Change preposition
to
water
supply, Dam/storage
water
provides water
for consumers in different parts of the city
like households, factories and shops. Additionally
, the wastewaterwater in storage
as well as
the city
flow
to the Correct subject-verb agreement
flows
water
treatment plant. The stormwaterwater
stream toward the river Correct your spelling
stormwater
assist
the ecosystem.
in order for future Change the verb form
assists
water
supply, it is readily apparent that water
from both storage
and Dam/Storage
and water
treatment plants is use
in the Change the form of the verb
used
city
for various purposes. On the other hand
, both storm water
and water
water
from the city
move to water
treatment which causes have high-quality water
supply. However
, the stormware
will not add to the river which might pose a threat to wildlife Correct your spelling
stormwater
as well as
the environment.Submitted by sr.alizadeh9191 on
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