smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the wprld today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

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of

people

are died

due to

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douse and

use

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the use

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of

drugs

in their normal routine,

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to overcome

this

goverment

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government

have

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to

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strict action against it like

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the supply of

product

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products

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and

organization

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the

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awareness campaign. I completely disagree with

this

idea and

following

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essay will support my opinion

along

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apply

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.

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, if law

maker's

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dropped

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or ban the supply of

drugs

then

it

become

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difficult

of

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drugers

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drugs

to survive,

hence

, they may depend upon

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another drug

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drugs

like drinks

that is

why

government

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the government

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have to provide

the

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awareness seminar in which they guides the

individual

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individuals

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about the harmful effects of cigarettes and other

tobacco

, so that

people

reduce the useful it in their life.

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this

,

authority

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should

takes

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take

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strict action against those

people

who

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take

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drugs

in

the

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public

place

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, so that they have fear in their

mind

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minds

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.

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, automatically, declares the

used

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of it .

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,

instead

of

ban

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banning

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these things,

government

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the government

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should increase the price of cigarettes,

therefore

poor and

middle class

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middle-class

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people

unable

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are unable

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to afford that product, by

this

sale and use of cigarettes and

tobacco

can

be handle

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effectively. On the other side

throws

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the price of fresh vegetables and fruit

to encourage

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encourages

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them to eat healthy food rather than unhealthy food. By

this

, the interest of

public

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the public

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in cigarette and

tobacco

tackle . In conclusion,

although

ban

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banning

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cigarette

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cigarettes

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and other

tobacco

product

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products

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is not a bad idea,

nonetheless

it is not

only

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the only

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solve

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solution

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as

government

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the government

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can organize the health care campaign ,

increasing

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increase

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the tax

on

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apply

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it

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apply

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and so on.