The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the number of people in one Asian country
after
Correct word choice
who
passing
the test drive between 1980 and 2010. Wrong verb form
passed
Overall
, the trend showed that the percentage of women
and men who passed from
the driving tests Change preposition
apply
were
consistently Verb problem
apply
increase
until 2000, before it dropped in 2010 for Wrong verb form
increased
women
and was stagnant for men.
It can be seen that from the graph, stood at almost 50% in 1980, women
passed the driving exams and after two decades, it reached to
around 70% in 2000. Unfortunately, Change preposition
apply
from
the data has shown that the percentage declined by around 5% to 65% in 2010.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the quality of driving of men were
below Change the verb form
was
the
Correct determiner usage
that
women
since the beginning of the period it only experienced approximately above 20%. After that, they managed to be able to finish the driving test with Change preposition
of women
a
significant progress Remove the article
apply
for
almost Change preposition
apply
doubled
at around 50% in 2000 and 2010.Wrong verb form
doubling
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