In some societies, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? Do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?
It is prevalent in many societies more and more men and women prefer and decide to live alone.
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people far away from their families, being more responsible about everything in Wrong verb form
making
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their
life
means that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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that
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for
go
out of their family houses and live alone , and Fix the infinitive
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majority
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a lots
of drawbacks , because Correct the article-noun agreement
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it will make humans far away from family homes and and
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news for there sisters and brothers.
On the other side , living with no one will learn
people to become more responsible and dependent Verb problem
teach
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on
them
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themselves
selfs
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selves
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their home requirements , Change preposition
of
such
as their food , supermarket needs and also
their place if it is clean or dirty and things they do not care about it in there family home.Also
, will give them a space to think and they need it to plan for future
and what should Correct article usage
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for others
others
of family members.Correct quantifier usage
other
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, in Canada, the higher scores owners in their schools are the students who live by themselves.And for that, i
believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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To conclude
,although
dealing with life alone may put men and women away from the people they love, it is learned younger being responsible humans.Submitted by ghad17172002 on
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