#Health - "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (IELTS 2, AC)

There is

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debate concerning which kind of

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system is more

apropriated

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appropriate

appropriated

to be

instaured

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insured

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in a country. Considering an old phrase which says that "Prevention is better than cure", preventive

health

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has shown an

imense

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immense

saving of money and better quality of life

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the

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apply

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individuals in some countries in comparison to

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apply

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late treatment. Because of that,

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essay agrees with the statement and it will be shown in the following lines. It is known that creating campaigns and promoting educational material to literate people about some

topic

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topics

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demands resources.

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, the costs of

medicaments

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and daily rates of

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hospital

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is

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are

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much

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more expersiver

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expersiver

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expensive

.

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, it is very

importante

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important

to consider

to apply

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health

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the health

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budget

on

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to

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health

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education and

promote

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promoting

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awareness of diverse

kind

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kinds

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of

disease

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diseases

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and how to prevent them.

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, allerting women teaching them how to discover a cancerous nodule in the

biginning

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beginning

, makes the treatment more efficient with more chances of cure.

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, it will demand less money

resources

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and resources

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to

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for

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the healing process.

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to it, making people aware

about

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of

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how to prevent sickness,

enhance

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enhances

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the quality of life of the population, as far as

peole

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people

will keep

heathy

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healthy

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and

consequently

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will avoid to spread

illness

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of illness

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.

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, during the pandemic, many efforts were made by

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organs to spread the right conduct of sanitization and prevention of Covid-19, which was fundamental

contain

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the dissemination of the virus.

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, applying preventive measures is the best way to

conduce

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improve

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the

health

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sector, promoting

better

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a better

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quality of life

to

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the people and avoiding spending more money than expected.