Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there has been a significant increase in car accidents which results in many lost lives, though
people
recognize a problem which is a logical solution. It is suggested that one driving test should not be enough for the rest of a person’s life, but regular tests should be taken.
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statement,
however
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there are more benefits which outweigh the drawbacks. One of the major pros of taking repeated tests is that
people
will get the ability to remember and learn new things. It is well known that
law
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changes quite frequently and
this
results in most
people
now even knowing the new rules.
Additionally
,
this
will be an opportunity for
people
to read and educate themselves before a test.
For example
, most elderly
people
are dangerous
drivers
which cause these vehicle crashes because of health problems or low knowledge
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updated rules. I am quite familiar with
this
situation as my grandad is 73 and still drives. He is unfamiliar with what the speed limit is, road signs and lines.
Therefore
, it is necessary for periodic driving examinations which could decrease accidents or perhaps even save a life.
On the other hand
, there are numerous cons of repeated tests which
drivers
should uptake
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.
Firstly
, if there
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a stated law that it is a must to take frequent
drivers
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exams,
then
the government should increase the funding for these examination
centers
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, which could lead to worker shortage or simply a decrease
of
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employees.
In particular
, the government would provide financial aid to driving
centers
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to buy more books, computers, cars and new technology in general.
Consequently
,
this
could lead to smaller salaries or not enough employees to work with
this
new law. In conclusion, renewing
drivers
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licenses from time to time could have a major impact on safer roads and
less
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fewer
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bad habits for
drivers
,
however
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this
requires financial funds and could lead to a falling workforce. These changes would lead to substantial benefits.
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Make sure to directly address the question, clearly stating if the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Work on fully developing your examples to support your main points. Include more specific and in-depth examples if possible.
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