The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The pie charts

compares

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the percentage of methods dealing with dangerous waste materials in three particular countries.

Overall

, the three certain nations are considered, including,

Republic

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the Republic

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Korea

Sweaden

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Sweden

, and

United

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the United

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Kingdom. The most popular approach to dispose of detrimental products in

Korea

is recycling, in the UK and

Sweden

is to bury them

undeground

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underground

To begin

, 69% of waste is recycled in

Korea

, followed by

Sweden

, accounting for the highest proportion in

this

country, followed by

Sweden

, at 25%.

In contrast

, the sustainable way is not utilised at all in the United Kingdom, where placing harmful products

undeground

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underground

is a pretty common method, at 82%.

Similarly

, digging is a

renown

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procedure in

Sweden

, at 55%, and just 22% is recorded in

Korea

, which was a similar percentage as for incineration in

Sweden

, at 20%. The least significant method in

Korea

was the destruction

products

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of products

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by fire (9%),

as well as

United

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the United

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Kingdom, at just 2%. Even though

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chemical treatment and dumping at sea have the same percentage of 8%,

this

number still surpasses that of

burning

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the burning

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process.

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