The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts

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the percentage of methods dealing with dangerous waste materials in three particular countries.

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, the three certain nations are considered, including,

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Korea

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Sweaden

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Sweden

, and

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Kingdom. The most popular approach to dispose of detrimental products in

Korea

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is recycling, in the UK and

Sweden

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is to bury them

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underground

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, 69% of waste is recycled in

Korea

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, followed by

Sweden

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, accounting for the highest proportion in

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country, followed by

Sweden

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, at 25%.

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, the sustainable way is not utilised at all in the United Kingdom, where placing harmful products

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is a pretty common method, at 82%.

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, digging is a

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procedure in

Sweden

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, at 55%, and just 22% is recorded in

Korea

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, which was a similar percentage as for incineration in

Sweden

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, at 20%. The least significant method in

Korea

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was the destruction

products

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by fire (9%),

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United

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Kingdom, at just 2%. Even though

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chemical treatment and dumping at sea have the same percentage of 8%,

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number still surpasses that of

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the burning

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process.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Do the advantages of using computers for learning outweigh its advantages?

Your workplace does not have a parking area for cars, and it is causing some problems. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – Describe the problems it has caused. – Explain what benefits a parking area would bring to the company. – Suggest a solution.

Some people think that the government should provide free public libraries in every town, while others think that this is a waste of money because people can access to information on the Internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that purchasing imported agricultural products has a positive effect, others think consuming domestic products is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?