The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.
The maps compare the changes
of
Feliztone city between 1967 and 2001.
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Overall
, the
significant modifications had been Correct article usage
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occured
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occurred
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period, incrluding
the removal of Correct your spelling
including
a
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fishmarket
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fish market
Moreover
, many places had
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such
as private and public beaches, a car park, and wind turbines.
To begin
, the shops and a high street were surrounded by a gold course and a
farmland on top of the map in 1967. Remove the article
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Additionally
, at the bottom, vegetation and dunes were placed next to a hotel and a cafe just next to the marina with a pier located from the left side of the fish market.
Similarly
, looking at the modern map, a golf course and shops from the right side of the street remained unchanged, whereas
apartments replced
the whole line of shops from the right side in 2001. Correct your spelling
replaced
Additionally
, a swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts were established instead
of a farmland which was erased from the map. Fish
market and a pier were Correct article usage
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also
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with Correct your spelling
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