The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.

The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.
The maps compare the changes
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Feliztone city between 1967 and 2001.
Overall
,
the
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significant modifications had been
occured
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occurred
over
this
period,
incrluding
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including
the removal of
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farmland and
fishmarket
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fish market
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.
Moreover
, many places
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appeared,
such
as private and public beaches, a car park, and wind turbines.
To begin
, the shops and a high street were surrounded by a gold course and
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farmland on top of the map in 1967.
Additionally
, at the bottom, vegetation and dunes were placed next to a hotel and a cafe just next to the marina with a pier located from the left side of the fish market.
Similarly
, looking at the modern map, a golf course and shops from the right side of the street remained unchanged,
whereas
apartments
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replaced
the whole line of shops from the right side in 2001.
Additionally
, a swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts were established
instead
of a farmland which was erased from the map.
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market and a pier were
also
sucessfully replced
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successfully replaced
with
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beaches for
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public and private use.
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