The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in there different countries.

The line chart compares the percentage of elderly citizens community who are over 64

years

of age in the

USA

,

Sweden

,

Japan

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over a century.

Overall

,

Japan

will have experienced a significant rise by the end of

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shown. The

USA

and

Sweden

are increasing steadily in the number of over 64

years

old residents. as can be seen, in 1940 the population aged 65

years

and over in

Japan

formed solely 5% of

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population,

while

in The

USA

they are responsible for almost 9% of citizens and

Sweden

accounted for approximately 7% of

population

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. In 1940

Japan

started to see a steep fall to 3%

untill

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until

about 1960

then

it stayed fixed,

while

the two other countries were rising.

Also

evident is, in 2030

Japan

will start to rise sharply and

in

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a few

years

later it will overtake others to reach

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peak of almost 27% in 2040.

Moreover

, Just before 2000, The

USA

and

Sweden

were equal in

persentage

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percentage

of old people at about 15% and they are expected to soar to about 22.5% and 25% respectively.