The issue of the Olympic
games
nowadays
receivesVerb problem
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extremely
debateReplace the word
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topic. Society claims these professional sports can associate people with different
countryFix the agreement mistake
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being together
while
others think being host venue will spend
much Fix the agreement mistake
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money
which could be used
toChange preposition
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essential
issueFix the agreement mistake
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. I am going to focus on
argumentFix the agreement mistake
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in
favorChange the spelling
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of
this
before moving to look at those
againstCorrect pronoun usage
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. In my
firm Correct word choice
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opinion, I believe Olympic funding is beneficial to help citizens build international connections.
To begin
, many people consider still there
some Correct quantifier usage
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vital issues
shouldCorrect pronoun usage
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be done rather than using
moneyAdd an article
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for the Olympic
games
. Inequality of development city
beingWrong verb form
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mainAdd an article
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concern of
these issueChange the determiner
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. The
money
is used to address the urgency of the population's welfare,
for
exampleAdd the comma(s)
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adequate health facilities. In developing
countryFix the agreement mistake
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with low
numberFix the agreement mistake
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of
hospitalFix the agreement mistake
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, society difficult to reach it.
On the other hand
, there are two reasons why
athleteCorrect article usage
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championship is important those are
eventFix the agreement mistake
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to make
opportunityAdd an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
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to develop
overseasCorrect article usage
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network and introduce the place
thatCorrect determiner usage
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event be held. World
wide Correct word choice
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tournament is attended much
citizenshipReplace the word
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thatCorrect pronoun usage
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have diverse
backgroundFix the agreement mistake
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with their uniqueness.
For instance
,
countryCorrect article usage
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hasCorrect pronoun usage
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developingWrong verb form
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technology will share
toChange preposition
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regionAdd an article
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that has rich oil resource and
their Correct pronoun usage
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have
possibilityCorrect article usage
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to collaborate.
Moreover
, the place where the
games
isChange the verb form
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used will definitely be a topic of conversation and appear in
newspaperFix the agreement mistake
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or television which
makeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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it famous.
, hosting professional
championshipFix the agreement mistake
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getCorrect subject-verb agreement
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sponsors with fantastic amounts because it is
prestigiousAdd an article
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event. Large
companiesAdd a verb
companies are
companies were
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willing to encourage
thisCorrect determiner usage
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games
because some of them love to watch a great tournament and
also
it can increase their popularity.
In conclusion,
although
there some issues can be
doneVerb problem
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with
money
,
but Correct word choice
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it can not reason that
games
isVerb problem
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not be held