You are soon going to spend three month doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience In your letter. Thank the manager fort he opportunşity to do work experience. Explain what you hope to learn from the work experience. Ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do.
Dear Mr Manager,
I am writing
this
letter for my first work
experience, internship
. First of all, Correct article usage
an internship
i
want to say thank you. Thank you for accepting me. It is my Change the capitalization
I
honor
to Change the spelling
honour
work
with you. You can be sure that ı will be hardworking
.
In the next three months, Correct your spelling
hard working
i
will try to learn using new programs becauseChange the capitalization
I
,
Remove the comma
apply
ıt
can Correct your spelling
they
be help
my Change the verb form
help
work
life in the future. Also
ım thinking of Add a comma
Also,
ımprove
my working network. I hope ı will be more Correct your spelling
improving
socialize
.
I wondering does the company has Wrong verb form
socialised
service
Correct article usage
a service
?
Because my home so far to company. I can come myself but someday public transport does not Change the punctuation
.
work
. So, i
can late Change the capitalization
I
work
. My other question about food. Does the company gives
lunch? If it Change the verb form
give
not
, Add a missing verb
is not
i
will need to allocate Change the capitalization
I
extra
budget for Correct article usage
an extra
this
. I am waiting
answer my questions. Thank you so much again for accepting me.
Respectfully,
Kağan.Add the particle
waiting to
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Greeting and Closing
Start your letter with an appropriate salutation, such as 'Dear [Manager's Name],' and end with an appropriate closing phrase, such as 'Yours sincerely' followed by your full name.
Logical Structure
Use clear paragraphing to separate your ideas. Each paragraph should cover a single topic. Begin with thanking the manager, move on to what you hope to learn, and end with your questions about the work experience.
Complete Response
Make sure to directly address all the points in the prompt. Explicitly state that you are thanking the manager, explain in more detail what aspects of the job you look forward to learning, and keep your questions relevant to the work experience.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a formal and professional tone throughout your letter. Avoid informal language and abbreviations. Do not use contractions such as 'I'm' in formal writing—use 'I am' instead. Avoid using phrases that are too casual for a workplace setting.
Coherence and Cohesion
Revise the spelling, grammar, and punctuation in your letter. Remember to capitalize the personal pronoun 'I' and the first letter of sentences. Also, check for run-on sentences and ensure proper sentence structure and word choice to clearly express your ideas.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,