You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say : 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
Dear Murat,
I am writing
you
because Change preposition
to you
i
want to talk about Change the capitalization
I
someting
. Nowadays Correct your spelling
something
i
wondering how can i feel happier. In my Change the capitalization
I
opinion
if you want to feel happier, you should Add a comma
opinion,
close
to family and friends. Add a missing verb
be close
Human
Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
lives
80 years. So, Life is too short and we must use time Correct subject-verb agreement
live
cleverly
. Rephrase
wisely
For
this
reason
Add a comma
reason,
i
am leaving Change the capitalization
I
a
Change the word
my
job
and coming back to my hometown.
Currently, i
am lookingChange the capitalization
I
a
new Change preposition
for a
job
in my hometown. Actually
Add a comma
Actually,
i
find someone a new Change the capitalization
I
job
however
it salary is too low. So, ı am planning to look for a job
by talkinf
face to face. I think it is Correct your spelling
talking
more
stronger than Change the word
apply
Add an article
the internet
internet
. Capitalize word
Internet
Moreover
, ı can explain clearly my self to boss
.
Correct pronoun usage
my boss
Finally
, i
need to learn your opinion. We should meet Change the capitalization
I
this
weekend. Maybe we can discuss about
myRemove the preposition
apply
resingning
and give me some advice. Please write to me again.
With love,
Kağan.Correct your spelling
resigning
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more clearly with a central topic for each paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Begin with a clear opening paragraph where you state your main reason for writing.
coherence cohesion
Formulaic expressions can be employed to start and end your letter in a conventional manner. You did well in greeting and closing the letter.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to connect your ideas and sentences more naturally for better flow.
task achievement
Address all three points in the task throughout your letter more clearly and expand on each point.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear purpose and sticks to a single main idea.
task achievement
Maintain an appropriate tone throughout the letter. The tone of your letter is mostly appropriate, but work on using consistent formal or informal language based on the context.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,