The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph gives information about the figures of citizens in the United States by their salary per annum in the
years
2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there has not been much change in the numbers throughout the three
years
, but the income with a hundred thousand or more seems to be at the top most of the time,
whereas
, from 75,000 - 99,999 is at the least.
To begin
with, people with less than twenty-five thousand and above to 49,999 dollars have seen a small rise and
then
a step down throughout the
years
and
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at nearly 27
million
.
However
, despite a dip for the people with 100,000 or more earnings yearly, they have ended the year with 34
million
approximately getting it at the highest of the other four categories. Moving on, there has always been a difference of 5
million
between the ones earning $75,000 - $99,999 with the second one being at the least at all times.
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the end, there was very little change in these two groups in the
years
2007, 2011 and 2015, with one having just over 20
million
and the other touching 15
million
respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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