The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These maps illustrate the transformation of Ryemouth village from 1995 to the present day.
Overall
, the village witnessed minor changes with the most noticeable being the disappearance of a
farmland, a forest Remove the article
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park
, and a fishing port.
In 1995, there was a T-shaped road
in the middle of the village that ran toward the sea. On the northwest, there were houses
next to the road
, whereas
on the northeast, there was a
farmland right beside the forest Remove the article
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park
. On the left hand
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left-hand
side
, In the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
road
, there was a small rectangular residential. At the end
of the road
, while
on the east side
, there was a hotel opposite the cafe, on the opposite side
was an array of shops opposite the fish market. In the south, there was a fishing port on the sea.
Currently, the northwest houses
were added more houses
. Farmland and forest park
were replaced by Fix the agreement mistake
parks
a
golf and Correct article usage
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a
tennis courts respectively. A new Correct article usage
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road
connecting the west and the main road
was built next to the rectangular residential. There were some houses
added on the left-hand side
of the rectangular residential area while
it remains intact. The new car park
was constructed next to the hotel. Strikingly, shops were replaced by some new restaurants. Furthermore
, a new apartment was erected opposite the old shops. Noticeably, the fishing port was removed.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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