The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These maps illustrate the transformation of Ryemouth village from 1995 to the present day.
Overall
, the village witnessed minor changes with the most noticeable being the disappearance of
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farmland, a forest
park
, and a fishing port. In 1995, there was a T-shaped
road
in the middle of the village that ran toward the sea. On the northwest, there were
houses
next to the
road
,
whereas
on the northeast, there was
a
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farmland right beside the forest
park
. On the
left hand
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side
, In the
center
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of the
road
, there was a small rectangular residential.
At the end
of the
road
,
while
on the east
side
, there was a hotel opposite the cafe, on the opposite
side
was an array of shops opposite the fish market. In the south, there was a fishing port on the sea. Currently, the northwest
houses
were added more
houses
. Farmland and forest
park
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were replaced by
a
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golf and
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tennis courts respectively. A new
road
connecting the west and the main
road
was built next to the rectangular residential. There were some
houses
added on the left-hand
side
of the rectangular residential area
while
it remains intact. The new car
park
was constructed next to the hotel. Strikingly, shops were replaced by some new restaurants.
Furthermore
, a new apartment was erected opposite the old shops. Noticeably, the fishing port was removed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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