The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the reproduction procedure of large fish called the
salmon
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagrams about the processes from the
salmon
egg until it becomes the adult
salmon
.
Firstly
, the
salmon
eggs
can be found in the upper river with slow-moving conditions. In
this
slow-moving water, there are many reeds. Commonly, the
salmon
eggs
can be found on the below part of the reeds near the small stones. The difference between the
salmon
eggs
and small stones is the
size
of the
salmon
eggs
are smaller than the stones. And, for
this
step, it usually takes 5 to 6 months.
Secondly
,
salmon
eggs
will become the
fry
. The
size
of the
fry
is about 3 to 8 cm. The
fry
then
swims to the lower river with fast-flowing conditions. The
fry
will live around four years and
then
become a
smolt
. The
size
of the
smolt
is between 12 and 15 cm.
Moreover
, the
smolt
will swim to the open sea and live there for around five years.
Lastly
, the
smolt
will become an adult
salmon
with a
size
of about 70 to 76 cm.
This
adult
salmon
will produce
salmon
eggs
. And the cycle will start again from the first step.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, eggs, size, fry, smolt with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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