The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the reproduction procedure of large fish called the
salmon
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagrams about the processes from the Linking Words
salmon
egg until it becomes the adult Use synonyms
salmon
.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
salmon
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eggs
can be found in the upper river with slow-moving conditions. In Use synonyms
this
slow-moving water, there are many reeds. Commonly, the Linking Words
salmon
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eggs
can be found on the below part of the reeds near the small stones. The difference between the Use synonyms
salmon
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eggs
and small stones is the Use synonyms
size
of the Use synonyms
salmon
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eggs
are smaller than the stones. And, for Use synonyms
this
step, it usually takes 5 to 6 months.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
salmon
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eggs
will become the Use synonyms
fry
. The Use synonyms
size
of the Use synonyms
fry
is about 3 to 8 cm. The Use synonyms
fry
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then
swims to the lower river with fast-flowing conditions. The Linking Words
fry
will live around four years and Use synonyms
then
become a Linking Words
smolt
. The Use synonyms
size
of the Use synonyms
smolt
is between 12 and 15 cm.
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Moreover
, the Linking Words
smolt
will swim to the open sea and live there for around five years. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the Linking Words
smolt
will become an adult Use synonyms
salmon
with a Use synonyms
size
of about 70 to 76 cm. Use synonyms
This
adult Linking Words
salmon
will produce Use synonyms
salmon
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eggs
. And the cycle will start again from the first step.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, eggs, size, fry, smolt with synonyms.
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