The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the reproduction procedure of large fish called the
salmon
. Overall
, it can be seen from the diagrams about the processes from the salmon
egg until it becomes the adult salmon
.
Firstly
, the salmon
eggs
can be found in the upper river with slow-moving conditions. In this
slow-moving water, there are many reeds. Commonly, the salmon
eggs
can be found on the below part of the reeds near the small stones. The difference between the salmon
eggs
and small stones is the size
of the salmon
eggs
are smaller than the stones. And, for this
step, it usually takes 5 to 6 months.
Secondly
, salmon
eggs
will become the fry
. The size
of the fry
is about 3 to 8 cm. The fry
then
swims to the lower river with fast-flowing conditions. The fry
will live around four years and then
become a smolt
. The size
of the smolt
is between 12 and 15 cm.
Moreover
, the smolt
will swim to the open sea and live there for around five years. Lastly
, the smolt
will become an adult salmon
with a size
of about 70 to 76 cm. This
adult salmon
will produce salmon
eggs
. And the cycle will start again from the first step.Submitted by nadiamanda.salsabilla on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, eggs, size, fry, smolt with synonyms.
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