Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.

Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. 

Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts below illustrate the changes in
use
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the use
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of
revenue
yearly by a specific school in 1981 and 1991.
Overall
, in both 1981 and
1991
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1991,
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most money was used in teachers salaries
while
the least was spent on insurance. More money was used in
resources
such
as books in 1981 than in 1991. In 1981,
teachers
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teachers'
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salaries accounted for 40% of the total
revenue
and had the highest spending.
Teachers
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Teachers'
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pays
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pay
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in 1991
were
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was
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a quarter more than
spending
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the spending
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in
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on
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furniture and equipment which was
at
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apply
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15%. Spending
in
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on
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resources
such
as books in 1981 was 5% lower than in 1991. In 1991,
revenue
spent on insurance was 1% just over as compared to insurance spending in 1981.
Revenue
used on
resources
was equal
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to
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with
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to
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that spent on furniture and equipment both at 15% in 1981. The school managed to reduce its total costs on other
workers
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workers'
worker's
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salaries in 1991 by 7%
whereas
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while
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increasing spending on
resources
by 5% in the same year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, resources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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