Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts below illustrate the changes in
use
of Add an article
the use
revenue
yearly by a specific school in 1981 and 1991.
Overall
, in both 1981 and 1991
most money was used in teachers salaries Add a comma
1991,
while
the least was spent on insurance. More money was used in resources
such
as books in 1981 than in 1991.
In 1981, teachers
salaries accounted for 40% of the total Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
revenue
and had the highest spending. Teachers
Change noun form
Teachers'
Teacher's
pays
in 1991 Change the verb form
pay
were
a quarter more than Change the verb form
was
spending
Correct article usage
the spending
in
furniture and equipment which was Change preposition
on
at
15%. Spending Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
on
resources
such
as books in 1981 was 5% lower than in 1991. In 1991, revenue
spent on insurance was 1% just over as compared to insurance spending in 1981.
Revenue
used on resources
was equal Change preposition
to
with
that spent on furniture and equipment both at 15% in 1981. The school managed to reduce its total costs on other Change preposition
to
workers
salaries in 1991 by 7% Change noun form
workers'
worker's
whereas
increasing spending on Change preposition
while
resources
by 5% in the same year.Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, resources with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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