Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiements. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your knowledge and experience.
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of types
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a pig's
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of animals
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Introduction
Make sure to have a clear and concise introduction, stating the topic and your position. Avoid ambiguous phrases and be direct in presenting your thesis.
Coherence
Use a range of cohesive devices to link ideas across sentences and paragraphs, ensuring smooth transitions and logical flow of ideas.
Task Response
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Supporting Details
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Conclusion
Conclude your essay by summarizing the main points and reiterate your position clearly. Ensure that your conclusion is in line with your introduction.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite