The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changing trends in the different types of fuels among Americans from 1980 to 2015,
along with
its projections 15 years later.
Overall
, the usage of petrol, oil, natural gas, and coal as fuels has increased throughout the given period, compared to nuclear, solar/wind, and hydro energy
, which their little changes.
At the beginning of the period, gasoline and oil were already exploited in 35 units
. Even though with some small dips in 1985 and 1995, the energy
is projected to reach almost 50 quadrillion units
by 2030, with its steady upward throughout the previous years.
Coincidentally, with similar fluctuative
trends between natural gas and coal, the consumption of both Correct your spelling
fluctuating
are
expected to hit more than 20 quadrillion Correct subject-verb agreement
is
units
by 2030, from its
initial demand Correct pronoun usage
their
at
20 and 15 quadrillion Change preposition
of
units
, respectively.
In comparison, although
the usage from the alternatives and nuclear energy
began equally at 4 quadrillon
Correct your spelling
quadrillion
units
, similar trends only occured
for nuclear and solar/wind powerCorrect your spelling
occurred
,
since both of them steadily elevated and are expected to have more than 5quadrillion consumption, Remove the comma
apply
while
the usage in hydropower energy
will remain the same.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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