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The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changing trends in the different types of fuels among Americans from 1980 to 2015,
along with
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 its projections 15 years later.
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, the usage of petrol, oil, natural gas, and coal as fuels has increased throughout the given period, compared to nuclear, solar/wind, and hydro
energy
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, which their little changes. At the beginning of the period, gasoline and oil were already exploited in 35
units
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. Even though with some small dips in 1985 and 1995, the
energy
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 is projected to reach almost 50 quadrillion
units
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 by 2030, with its steady upward throughout the previous years. Coincidentally, with similar
fluctuative
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fluctuating
 trends between natural gas and coal, the consumption of both
are
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is
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 expected to hit more than 20 quadrillion
units
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 by 2030, from
its
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their
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 initial demand
at
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of
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 20 and 15 quadrillion
units
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, respectively. In comparison,
although
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 the usage from the alternatives and nuclear
energy
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 began equally at 4
quadrillon
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quadrillion
units
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, similar trends only
occured
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occurred
 for nuclear and solar/wind power
,
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 since both of them steadily elevated and are expected to have more than 5quadrillion consumption,
while
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 the usage in hydropower
energy
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 will remain the same.
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