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The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
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The three maps illustrate the renovations that took place in
Meadowside
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Village
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 and its
neighboring
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 town,
Fonton
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,
since
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 1962 up to the present day.
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,
Meadowside
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Village
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 has undergone a dramatic transformation over the past few decades, in the sense that there are now a myriad of new buildings in and around the area. It is now called the
Meadowside
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Suburbs
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,
instead
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 of
Village
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. The two places, the
Meadowside
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Suburbs
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 and
Fonton
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,
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 are now connected as well. Unlike the
village
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, no major constructions have taken place in
Fonton
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. Around 1985 in the
Meadowside
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Suburbs
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, a housing estate and a leisure complex were built close to each other. Just south of the housing estate, there is now a superstore. As has been mentioned before, there are now two major roads in the
Meadowside
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Suburbs
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, one of which connects the area to the
neighboring
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 town of
Fonton
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. In the present day, some changes have been made. Around the area connecting the
Meadowside
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Suburbs
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 and
Fonton
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, the people can now discover three new places, a hotel and a station in the north, and a business park in the south. There is
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 a new railway that connects
Fonton
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 to the station between the town and the
Meadowside
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Suburbs
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, village, fonton, suburbs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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