Not the best people, it very hard good – without caught, potential to commit – Break the law, but ethical judgement wrong. Ex. Some people sentence into prison punishment because breaking law but protecting family relatives. They might convey negative message, protection outweigh the punishment, mitigating danger

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educational sector, the topic

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around whether

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, who have become legal citizens, are the right

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educating

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adolescents away from committing a

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has sparked considerable debate. I partially agree with the proposal, considering some

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are not the best educators for

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. In my opinion, allowing those

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talking

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to

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are hazardous initiative since it is very hard to say whether they can make good ethical

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and distinguish right from wrong. Without testing their ethical standards, the only standard to evaluate those

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is that they have not committed

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a

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for a long period.

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might commit a

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again under extremely emotional circumstances. In China, many

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hurt others for protecting their family members. In

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particular case, they might convey misleading messages to

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ethical judgements.

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, I can understand some

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contend that

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are good educators for

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. Those

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are

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negative

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consequences

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of committing a

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by talking about their harsh living

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standards

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and isolated mindsets in prison. Some particular

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might be more

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.

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, Chris Wu, a famous Chinese actor

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draw

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millions of juvenile fans, has been sentenced to prison because of harassing an under-18 girl. The words about the danger of punishments from

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celebrity

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might exert more deterring effects

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juvenile fans. In conclusion, I agree that

teenagers

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can be educated by some

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, but not all of them, about the danger of committing a

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.