It is thought by
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people that young
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severe
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however
, some of them ponder that it could be
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system. As far as I am concerned I adamantly disagree with
this
statement in
this
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try to give my opinion from my best experience.
To commence with the first reason why I oppose the statement is
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young
children
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not
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to think about what is wrong or what is right for them. To elaborate on
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, time
children
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in bad beer
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and try to do some wrong
activities
due to
the pressure of bad peers but they
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not their own mind behind the same
crime
that they commit
due to
pressure.
For example
, a survey conducted by
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department in India
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revealed 6 out of 10 joint criminal
activities
due to
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bad peer group pressure.
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lead
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young
children
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if they do not stop at the beginning.
moreover
, the lack of knowledge and education always
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the young ones towards
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bad actions
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this
majority of
children
join bad companies
due to
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to receive appropriate intervention from their parents and the horizon of their brain
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limited
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bringCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them toward any direction whether
that is
good or bad.
For instance
, in third world countries majority of adult
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contribute their proportion to bad actions owing to lack of education and limited knowledge
hence
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them on track.
on the contrary
, some believe that they should receive appropriate or very tough cheese
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that would convey
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other offenders and help them to avoid
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criminal
activities
that may help them to
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on track and
this
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also
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crime
around us.
In conclusion , all those
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toward young people may spread the message
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a bill to stop wrong
activities
yet I believe that
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should use alternate abuse to bring the young ones on track
such
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or colleges that give good education and promote them to the society as a good citizen.