The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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These bar graphs illustrate the extra
work
that UK students
were doing rather than permanent professions while
studying for a degree and after completing it in 2008.
Overall
, the majority of both graduates and postgraduates tend to go for further
studies
instead
of doing a job, and the least amount
of them were engaged in voluntary work
. However
, a vast amount
of graduates seem to be in part-time work
, voluntary work
, or further
studies
, and others are unemployed compared to postgraduate students
.
Firstly
, a large number of graduate students
were doing further
studies
and the amount
was 29665, and the second largest amount
was 17735 who were
doing part-time Change the verb form
was
work
. Next,
16235 students
were unemployed, and the lowest amount
was 3500 students
doing voluntary work
.
Secondly
, postgraduates who were doing further
studies
seem the highest and it was 2725 and, then
, part-time work
, unemployment, and voluntary work
had second highest to lowest amount
and the statistics were 2535, 1625, and 345 respectively.Submitted by hasi13r on
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