The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph depicts the average
of
fast food consumption by Australian adolescents from 1975 to 2000, divided into three types of ready-made Change preposition
apply
meal
which are Fix the agreement mistake
meals
Pizza
, Use synonyms
Fish
and Use synonyms
Chips
, and Use synonyms
Hamburgers
. Use synonyms
Overall
, from an overview perspective, it can be seen that, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
followed similar trajectories and dramatically rose, Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
intake among Use synonyms
the
adolescents fell over the Correct article usage
apply
period
.
In 1975, the number of people Use synonyms
ate
Correct pronoun usage
who ate
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
stood at 100 Use synonyms
times
per year, higher than Use synonyms
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
where both Use synonyms
only
below 20 Add a missing verb
were only
times
eaten per year. After experiencing a decline in 1980 to around 80 Use synonyms
times
eaten per year, the amount of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
intake rose and reached a notable high of 97 Use synonyms
times
eaten in 1985. Despite a fluctuation, the consumption rate of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
steadily dropped and a data point at around 39% to the end of the Use synonyms
period
surveyed.
Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
showed different Use synonyms
phenomenon
compared to Fix the agreement mistake
phenomena
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the pattern of Linking Words
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
ingestion Use synonyms
were
similar but the consumption rate of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
hamburgers
was higher for the majority of the Use synonyms
period
. At the initial point in 1975, adolescents ate Use synonyms
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
around 8 and 10 Use synonyms
times
, respectively. Over the next Use synonyms
period
, there Use synonyms
were
Change the verb form
was
significant
increase Add an article
a significant
the significant
of
Change preposition
in
pizza
ingestion to a high of 80 Use synonyms
times
eaten in 1995, tenfolding the amount in 1975, and remained stable afterwards. Use synonyms
Similarly
, after reaching Linking Words
a
highest number at around 100 Change the article
the
times
eaten, Use synonyms
intake
rate of Correct article usage
the intake
hamburger
stayed constant until 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, period, times with synonyms.
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