The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph depicts the average
of
fast food consumption by Australian adolescents from 1975 to 2000, divided into three types of ready-made Change preposition
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meal
which are Fix the agreement mistake
meals
Pizza
, Fish
and Chips
, and Hamburgers
. Overall
, from an overview perspective, it can be seen that, while
pizza
and hamburgers
followed similar trajectories and dramatically rose, fish
and chips
intake among the
adolescents fell over the Correct article usage
apply
period
.
In 1975, the number of people ate
Correct pronoun usage
who ate
fish
and chips
stood at 100 times
per year, higher than pizza
and hamburgers
where both only
below 20 Add a missing verb
were only
times
eaten per year. After experiencing a decline in 1980 to around 80 times
eaten per year, the amount of fish
and chips
intake rose and reached a notable high of 97 times
eaten in 1985. Despite a fluctuation, the consumption rate of fish
and chips
steadily dropped and a data point at around 39% to the end of the period
surveyed.
However
, pizza
and hamburgers
showed different phenomenon
compared to Fix the agreement mistake
phenomena
fish
and chips
. In addition
, the pattern of pizza
and hamburgers
ingestion were
similar but the consumption rate of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
hamburgers
was higher for the majority of the period
. At the initial point in 1975, adolescents ate pizza
and hamburgers
around 8 and 10 times
, respectively. Over the next period
, there were
Change the verb form
was
significant
increase Add an article
a significant
the significant
of
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in
pizza
ingestion to a high of 80 times
eaten in 1995, tenfolding the amount in 1975, and remained stable afterwards. Similarly
, after reaching a
highest number at around 100 Change the article
the
times
eaten, intake
rate of Correct article usage
the intake
hamburger
stayed constant until 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, period, times with synonyms.
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