The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.

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The table depicts the total number of

medals

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won by the top ten

countries

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in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games. The columns represent the total

Gold

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Silver

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and Bronze

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achieved by each country,

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the rows rank

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based on total

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gained, with the top one sitting on in the uppermost row.

Norway

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won the most

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in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games, gaining 39

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in total,

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second position is followed by

Germany

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with 31

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Norway

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was

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the highest achiever of

silver

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and

gold

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medals

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in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games, successfully winning 14

silver

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medals

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and 11 bronze

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Norway

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and

Germany

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shared the same figure of

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medal

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, with 14

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each.

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Norway

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won more

silver

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and bronze

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medals

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medal

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, each by 4

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more than

Germany

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, so that puts them above

Germany

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in the table. It is interesting to see that Sweden, in sixth place, won

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medals

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than

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in seventh to tenth position by only winning 14

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. Even

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obtained fewer

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in total, Sweden managed to win more

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medals

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than the other

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with 7

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on hand, which contributed to more tally points in the competition.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, countries, gold, silver, norway, germany with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

201 words

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The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career. While others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those relate to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In many countries, recently young single people have been living far from their parents, from the time they began studies or work and until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railways for very fast train between cities. other belive the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?