The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
The table depicts the total number of
medals
won by the top ten countries
in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games. The columns represent the total Gold
, Silver
and Bronze medals
achieved by each country, while
the rows rank countries
based on total medals
gained, with the top one sitting on in the uppermost row.
Norway
won the most medals
in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games, gaining 39 medals
in total, while
second position is followed by Germany
with 31 medals
. Norway
was also
the highest achiever of silver
and gold
medals
in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games, successfully winning 14 silver
medals
and 11 bronze medals
. Norway
and Germany
shared the same figure of gold
medal
, with 14 Fix the agreement mistake
medals
medals
each. However
, Norway
won more silver
and bronze Fix the agreement mistake
medals
medal
, each by 4 Fix the agreement mistake
medals
medals
more than Germany
, so that puts them above Germany
in the table.
It is interesting to see that Sweden, in sixth place, won less
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fewer
medals
than countries
in seventh to tenth position by only winning 14 medals
. Even they
obtained fewer Correct word choice
though they
medals
in total, Sweden managed to win more gold
medals
than the other countries
with 7 medals
on hand, which contributed to more tally points in the competition.Submitted by nicolasbungaran on
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