The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate the floor of
public
library before and after was developed 20 years ago.
Add an article
the public
Overall
, over the period the floor of Linking Words
library
was completely transformed with new amenities Add an article
the library
such
as Linking Words
new
cafe, computer Correct article usage
a new
room
and lecture Use synonyms
room
.
Looking Use synonyms
further
into the details, in the centre of the library the tables and Linking Words
charis
were demolished. The children's book area was destroyed and turned into a lecture Correct your spelling
chairs
room
. Use synonyms
However
, the children's Linking Words
books
Use synonyms
was
replaced in the new Change the verb form
were
story telling
events with two sofas. The reading Correct your spelling
storytelling
room
and enquire desk were demolished and Use synonyms
coverted
in a computer Correct your spelling
converted
covered
room
and cafe.
Meanwhile, the adult Use synonyms
ficton
Correct your spelling
fiction
books
Use synonyms
was
turned into all reference Change the verb form
were
books
.Use synonyms
Although
adult non-fiction Linking Words
books
Use synonyms
was
changed to adult fiction Change the verb form
were
book
and extended with new Fix the agreement mistake
books
infromation
Correct your spelling
information
desk
and Fix the agreement mistake
desks
self-services
machines. The Correct your spelling
self-service
cd's
videos and games Correct your spelling
CD's
was
demolished in order to make a Change the verb form
were
story telling
events area.Correct your spelling
storytelling
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