The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart
illustrate
the rate of families owned and rented accommodation in U.K and Wales from 1918 and 2011, Change the verb form
illustrates
period
of nearly 100 years.
Correct article usage
a period
Overall
, the highest rate in 1918 was renting homes, whereas
the lowest rate was owning houses
. On other
hand, owned Correct article usage
the other
houses
increased sharply in 1939, while
renting dropped slightly in the same year.
Looking at the details, rented accommodation was the highest owning one in1918, at about 78% whereas
owned was the lowest on
1918, at nearly 33%. The families owning Change preposition
in
houses
increased gradually from about 22 to around 33 percent nearly by
11 proportion a period Change preposition
apply
nearly
25 Change preposition
of nearly
year
. After a sharp climb in the ratio of owning, the renting proportion decreased gradually Change to a plural noun
years
while
the owning jumped significant
from nearly 23% to about 70% in 2001
Looking at more details can see that the percentage of owning was approximately 70 per cent. On Change the adjective
significantly
other
contrary, the percentage of renting was almost 32%. Correct article usage
the other
In addition
to that, the ratio of owning houses
was exactly 50 per cent in 1971.Submitted by waell12 on
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