The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph compares the intake of three specific fast foods taken by the youth of Australia between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, the youngsters of Australia showed much interest in Hamburgers
during the end of the period while
the previous focus was completely on Fish
and Chips
. However
, the consumption of Pizza was extremely low in the starting time.
In the year
1975, the intake of Hamburgers
was only 10 times
per year
which was ten times
lower in contrast
to Fish
and Chips
100 times
per year
. Additionally
, in the coming years of 1980 and 1985, there was a huge increment in the consumption of Hamburgers
with the number 40 and 80 respectively. Meanwhile, the utilization of Fish
and Chips
suffered with fluctuations of approximately 90 and 98 per year
.
After that, between the years 1990 and 2000, the number of Hamburgers
consumed by teenagers was approximately 100 times
per year
while
Fish
and Chips
faced a drastic fall of 40 from 98. However
, Pizza featured with the continuous progress from 1975 to 1990 with approximately 5 to 93 times
per year
. Also
, during the last
five years, it has held a constant rate of 93 Pizza per year
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