The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

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The pie graph illustrates the causes why pupils choose a specific United Kingdom in two years (1987 and 2007) measured by percentage.

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,it can be clearly seen that the quality of resources is the main reason in both years.

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the less common reason was good sport and social activities in 2007.

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reason was close to

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my parents

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home in 1987. During 1987 and 2007, there was a slow increase in a suitable degree course from 35% to 37% and there was a slight growth in the quality of teaching by almost 3%.

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, the percentage of quality resources

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slightly by 21% in 1987 and 17% in 2007, respectively. The number of good sports and social activities went down rapidly (about 19% to

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6%) in 1987 and 2007, but the figure of close to parental homes rose dramatically near 10% to approximately 22% in 1987 and 2007.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

Some poeple claim that it is unfair to have same age limit in every work.Do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?