The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures describe the post-graduate condition of Anthropology undergraduate students. The pie chart compares where they want to go percentage-wise
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the table provides details about their income (in dollars) after working for five years in different places.
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the data, the majority of the graduates take the full-time working position.
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, a very small portion of them are juggling between part-time work and postgraduate study.
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, most of them earn more than $100.000 in 5 years span and only a small part of the students receive less than $5.000.
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more than half are now full-time workers. Meanwhile, only 15% of them are doing part-time jobs.
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, a fifth of the graduates are still unemployed or not known.
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, less than 10% continue their study to a full-time master's.
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students that take a part-time job and master at the same time is only 5%. In terms of compensation, 40% of the ones who work as freelance consultants gained more than $100.000 and the same percentage have salaries ranging from $75.000 to $99.999.
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, The proportion for the government sector is 50% and 30% consecutively. Other remuneration for both sectors is lower than $75.000. On the other side, private companies mostly give a lower amount ($50.000 to $75.000) to the Anthropology graduates.
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