The given pie charts illustrate the average spending on housing, transport, food, health care and other goods and services in Japan and Malaysia in 2010.
The pie charts depict the average
expenses
in five different categories and different colors
Change the spelling
colours
such
as household, transport, food, health
care
, and other products and services
between two countries Japan
and Malaysia
in 2010. The information on charts is calibrated in terms of percentage.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest expenses
of Japan
were other goods and services
. In contrast
, Malaysia
was housing. Furthermore
, the lowest expenses
of Japan
and Malaysia
were health
care
.
When comparing the charts it can be explained that Japan
expense more on transport and Health
care
than Malaysia
.
From the Japan
chart it is apparent that firstly
, other goods and services
of japan
is 29%. Followed by, food is 24%. Thirdly
, 21% by housing Lastly
,6% by health
care
.
Whereas
, Malaysia
showed maximum expenses
by 34% in housing. Followed by 27% of food. Thirdly
26% by other goods and services
. Lastly
,3% by health
care
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