The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows information about the expenditure of weekly
families
income in a country in 1968 and 2018, measuring in percentage. Fix the agreement mistake
family
Overall
, the primary Linking Words
expanses
of income Use synonyms
was
dedicated Change the verb form
were
for
food, but a Change preposition
to
half century
later, leisure did.
Add a hyphen
half-century
Initially
, the most substantial income accounted for food at 35%, followed by clothing and Linking Words
footware
, and housing Correct your spelling
footwear
in
a small rate. Change preposition
at
Thus
, the same proportion was allocated to transport, household goods, and personal goods, amounting Linking Words
about
9%. Notably, in 2018, Change preposition
to about
the
food underwent significantly a Correct article usage
apply
down trend
which had almost Correct your spelling
downtrend
a
half of expenditure compared to in the past by about 12%.
Correct article usage
apply
However
, housing Linking Words
Use synonyms
expanses
surged Correct your spelling
expenses
to
by one a fifth; Change preposition
apply
moreover
, families used more money for leisure activities Linking Words
to
approximately 22%. Transport Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
expanses
climbed to around 14% in 2018, almost doubling about 7% allocation in 1968. The spending on household goods took the remaining rate, but Fuel and power Correct your spelling
expenses
Use synonyms
expanses
were plugged from above 5% to around 4%, taking the least of spending.Correct your spelling
expenses
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expanses with synonyms.
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