The supplied bar chart represents data about females in different age that gave a birth to the first child in Australia in the year 1966, 1986 and 2006.

The supplied bar chart represents data about females in different age that gave a birth to the first child in Australia in the year 1966, 1986 and 2006.
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The chart illustrates the percentages of
women
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, based on their maturity, who gave birth to their first child in three different
years
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, which are 1966, 1986, and 2006. From the diagram, it can be seen that the tendency of young adults to have children has been decreasing,
while
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the percentage of
women
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in their 25s has been stagnant over the
years
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.
However
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, the proportion of
women
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in other
age
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groups fluctuated significantly and didn't have a certain trend. In the year 1966, it is shown that the second fraction of females clearly dominated other
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groups with around 60% of them having their first child in their early 20s. Despite a decrease 20
years
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later, the domination of
this
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group still continued with roughly 50% of them still documented in the data. After being the biggest portion for
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,
this
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age
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group was overtaken by the early 30s
women
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in 2006 who got a constant increase over the
last
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40
years
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.
Besides
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the gradual decline of the former group, the trend of
women
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in their adolescent
years
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giving birth to a child had
also
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declined, starting from over 30% in 1966 to slightly over 10% in 2006.
On the other hand
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, the
women
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in their late 20s and 30s experienced a fluctuating direction over the
years
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,
whereas
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the
women
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with the
age
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older than 40 had the smallest portion of the information given.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, years, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • data representation
  • females
  • age groups
  • gave birth
  • first child
  • trends
  • significance
  • shift
  • later age groups
  • socio-economic factors
  • analysis
  • peak age groups
  • future predictions
  • past trends
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