The supplied bar chart represents data about females in different age that gave a birth to the first child in Australia in the year 1966, 1986 and 2006.

The supplied bar chart represents data about females in different age that gave a birth to the first child in Australia in the year 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The chart illustrates the percentages of
women
, based on their maturity, who gave birth to their first child in three different
years
, which are 1966, 1986, and 2006. From the diagram, it can be seen that the tendency of young adults to have children has been decreasing,
while
the percentage of
women
in their 25s has been stagnant over the
years
.
However
, the proportion of
women
in other
age
groups fluctuated significantly and didn't have a certain trend. In the year 1966, it is shown that the second fraction of females clearly dominated other
age
groups with around 60% of them having their first child in their early 20s. Despite a decrease 20
years
later, the domination of
this
group still continued with roughly 50% of them still documented in the data. After being the biggest portion for
years
,
this
age
group was overtaken by the early 30s
women
in 2006 who got a constant increase over the
last
40
years
.
Besides
the gradual decline of the former group, the trend of
women
in their adolescent
years
giving birth to a child had
also
declined, starting from over 30% in 1966 to slightly over 10% in 2006.
On the other hand
, the
women
in their late 20s and 30s experienced a fluctuating direction over the
years
,
whereas
the
women
with the
age
older than 40 had the smallest portion of the information given.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, years, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • data representation
  • females
  • age groups
  • gave birth
  • first child
  • trends
  • significance
  • shift
  • later age groups
  • socio-economic factors
  • analysis
  • peak age groups
  • future predictions
  • past trends
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